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| Sweet Justine 2003-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseWOW, Bailey that was great! The use and choice of words you use were Powerful. Its hard to belive that came out of the hipper, happy girl I know. It was very moving and described the way I feel alot of the time. |
| Hazel of the Eyes 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseJust keep fighting the barricades. I promise, they do fall down. |
| Kirika Moonshadow 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abusei know how you feel...my darkness still binds me, and pobably always will...can i join you in your corner? we can be outcasts together... really well written.your poetry is really good, just like your storys...i look forward to your next post..^_^ |
| Silver-Dragon5 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't often read poetry, but I thought I'd give yours a shot... and I really liked it. It was sad and strong. Very emotional. I especially liked you lines: "Instead I sit patiently, Facing a corner With my bak t the life That seems to hate me so much." They were the lines that stayed in my mind the whole way through. |
| GrungeIsDead 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was really good! A great description... Awesome.. *wiipes tear from eye* 'It's A Pirates Life For Me.' ROCKS!1 |