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| Green Eyed Angel 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseWow, nice story. I do wonder what will happen to nelson when he finds out Lina's in love with Harold. Keep up the good work! Take care! |
| Catherine Kate 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat can I say... It's so... ...sweet. ...nice. ...exciting. I just can't explain how you made me feel. It's so beautiful, almost fulfilling, that I want to finish or continue it by myself. But, of course, I cannot do such horrible thing... Die, **!(joke?!) You're so damn good! -catherine_kate- |
| IGNIS Elementi 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseNice. |
| gohst 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abusehey nice story you should toltally make a second chapter if youd like to talk i don't have an account yet but you can reach me at ok well alter i look forward to reading the next chapter :) |
| giroshi-hitada 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI love it! plz update! |
| whateva123 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseplease do update i think this chapter is rocking. |
| seasofsilence 2006-02-04 ch 1, | abuseKeep writing! It's really good: I like it. There are a few grammar errors, though. Run it through grammar check. |
| Toxxic Hugs 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseLove the story, the plot, and Harold^^. Please update soon! |
| Dirty Secret 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story's quite good actually. I was never one who judges someone by their names but...Harold?! *Shudders* Is he supposed to be the 'bad boy' of this story? Cuz it doesn't look it. Harold reminds me of a nerdy kinda boy (no offense)...and so does Nelson...*chuckles*. Anywayz, go on with the story, I wanna see how it flows/goes/ends (whatever) |
| lil.ditzy 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseIts a good start! I like it alot!! So hurry up and update!!Its actually long too...unlike my chapters which is why I like it..hehe |
| Lost Inside 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseHeheh That was pretty funny. Good job! I hope you update soon! Lost Inside |
| Maeghan Jade 2004-07-13 ch 1, | abuseAw...what a sweet way to end the story! And you made the characters seem so REAL, like they were people I knew... Great job, D.M. Kelly! |
| TinkFan 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseits really really good add more soon |
| DancingButterfly 2004-02-13 ch 1, | abuseHey! it was really good |
| Not a member, woo. 2003-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseJuicy. I say you write one with lots of details... Now I want to write, damn you. I wanna read about sex...Now. :) |