Reviews for ON THE AVENUE: Revealing Secrets

Reviews For: ON THE AVENUE: Revealing Secrets

Catherine Kate 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is a heavy one! A very serious topic if you ask me. I knew someone with such experience as Sharice do. And she's so traumatized that she's shaking as she spoke of the details of it. Ok. This tale had proven that listening is an important tool to make things clear but revealing things that one must trully need to know make things clearer, at both sides. Just a little confused about DAWN and FRANCISCO... Francisco is Karen's boyfriend and Dawn is the mother of Karen's boyfriend. If this is for real, how come that Dawn and Francisco made a one night stand in your "ON THE AVENUE: The Carr Family"? Are they these people or other characters bearing similar names? Just a little confused... and intrigured. -catherine_kate-
THE yellow duck 2004-02-24 ch 1,	abusestroeis good. some of the charecters seem a bit naive though. oh well. keep writing. waiting for the next chapter.
um....myself 2001-04-10 ch 1, anon.	abusegreat story keep it up!!!!!! ^_^ believe me I can relate to Sharice I.... not as bad as her but no fun stuff anyway I hope that it isn't from experience that you're writing this.
tRuELaDy0525 2000-12-23 ch 1,	abusewhoa...very good story..but I wouldn't want my boyfriend near another girl like that...and the sexual tension they have between them because their close?..uh..uh..a really really big NO NO
Amorina Leigh Carlton 2000-12-16 ch 1,	abuseWhoa!!
chevere 2000-12-11 ch 1,	abuseI dunno. Maybe I'm a stupid jealous, but I wouldn't let my boyfriend be so close to another girl. Personal experience, they call it.

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