Reviews for Inevitability - FictionPress.com

Aire1 2006-05-23 ch 1,	I think this has potential. There are several spelling and grammar errors throughout the piece, and the sentences seem unnecessarily short and choppy, but I think it could be worked into a decently gripping short story. Some of the events are overdone in this genre and a little hokey (for instance, the hero killing his boss), but overall, I like it. There are other things I'd say, but I'll save them, as I don't know if you're still active on this site.
Melissa Lea Night 2004-08-12 ch 1,	in the famous words of keanu reeves: "woah." goddamn you're a good writer!
Endless Nightmares 2004-02-05 ch 1,	Hello- Heh didn't notice the p.o.v, yikes my mistake. This was good, and I think it was descriptive. Keep it up.
Nickolaus Pacione 2003-07-25 ch 1,	This is a strong write. Hell I would definately be watching your work in the future -- sometimes the most haunting stories are written from the perspective of a journal. This is one that is very dark. I like this.
Derek 2003-07-21 ch 1,	Few typos, but nothing to detract from the plot. Mysterious and gripping, more real-world than many zombie stories. A nice work!
Melisande Shahrizai 2003-07-21 ch 1,	Wow. Very well written, good plot!