I think this has potential. There are several spelling and grammar errors throughout the piece, and the sentences seem unnecessarily short and choppy, but I think it could be worked into a decently gripping short story. Some of the events are overdone in this genre and a little hokey (for instance, the hero killing his boss), but overall, I like it. There are other things I'd say, but I'll save them, as I don't know if you're still active on this site.

in the famous words of keanu reeves: "woah." goddamn you're a good writer!

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Heh didn't notice the p.o.v, yikes my mistake. This was good, and I think it was descriptive.
Keep it up.

This is a strong write. Hell I would definately be watching your work in the future -- sometimes the most haunting stories are written from the perspective of a journal. This is one that is very dark. I like this.

Few typos, but nothing to detract from the plot. Mysterious and gripping, more real-world than many zombie stories. A nice work!

Wow. Very well written, good plot!