Hi vasco, i like this, it's good, that's all i think needs to be said!
~court~

Great work, the word choice was very powerful. Keep up the good work :)
*cosmo-queen*

I really like your poem. It's profound. ^_^

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

This piece has a very good rhythmic flow to it.. Sounds profound enough.. I didn't get the whole meaning of the piece.. Care to explain it to me if you have the time? =)
Anyway, I liked how it 'rang'.. Interestin subject matter and heh-- cool title..

that was really good and a real good usage of words ...i enjoyed it

Very thought provoking.

wow, that's a thinker, really good! Enjoyed it!