wow, awesome, its great

*jaw drops*

OMG! You are a very talented writer. Hopefully, you have an audio clip. *hint**hint* ;)

This song is excellent, and it is so moving. This also brings out your pure evilness, because it sucks the reader in. :P That's evil to me...but in a good way. ;)

You also asked in my "One Dance" work if I had an audio clip. Not at the moment. I'm still struggling to get a record deal. :-O

Anyway, to end a ridiculously unorthodox review, this piece is worth a lot of money. Believe me. If you presented it to the write person, a lot of artists would line up for it. It's amazing.

Keep up the good work! :D


Chris

0_0 Speachless...
Riddiculously, utterly, speachless...
So, cool...

Hey I liked this song and the way it was the last night, made me think about certain last nights i've had...good writing.

You reviewed mine, so it's only fair for me to review all of yours. I really like it. You like Ancient Greece, and you like poetry, have you ever read Psappho? She's a poet and lyricist from ancient greece, a worshiper of Aphrodite. The catholic church banned her poems because the were 'sacreligeous' and a lot of them were lost because of countless things like that. She was world reknowned at the time, and that's quite a feat for back then. She is so awesome. She had a school for girls on lesbos, and it was one of her lovers that the term ** came from. Sorry, talking your ear of now.
~ Stevie

wow... that was awesome! Your bio makes you sound like the male version of me or something. It's strange. And off of the subject Marilyn Manson has a fascinating bio. Anyway... off to read more of your poetry... ttyl

*tear* Aw, this is so amazingly great! I love it so much! It's the kind of song I like...it grabs your heart and squeezes it so hard so you feel the pain...the emotions the writer feels. I love it! Great job!

Sorry I missed you.

Just been having a deep and meaningful night in. The poem was so perfect to read after it.

amazing and just ** brilliant! That's the sort of thing that I hope oneday could bring me to tears. sometimes you come so close in your poems to feelings that I have it makes me wonder how alike we are. I may be to punk for my own good and I may sometimes come of as a happy go lucky surfer but really when it comes down to it your poems can capture so much in them I feel so weird reading them.

You really take so much emotion even if you mean it or not and weave it perfectly into your poems. You write about love and tragedy and it seems like you've been through it. I hope you have and never have too feel that. You talk about so man thins and it really does seem like you have experienced it. I only hope that you get the good and don't ever have to feel bad. when you write you do really seem like another person almost, it's beautiful.

I'm talking ** but I hope that in someway you catch what I am getting at.




Maybe you deserve these kisses, I think you do. Try not to look at them like they are wrong. Why not delve into the simple pleasure of a kiss? You did no wrong so why see it that you did? If we can't take some pleasure in life then what is there to live for? Just maybe, you should find yourself someone better to take your pleasure in.

Don't be a chicken. One mistaken kiss harms no one, watching the person you love kissing someone else and leaving you behind scars you for life.