That's really sweet... and you rhymed well, too. Rhyming's difficult, but you nailed it.

*sniff*
so sweet
hu's this for hunny??
gd luck with it :D

ur really amazing!

you definitely know how to express your thoughts with words. that's an excellent gift, cherish it & don't feel shy to use it. god luck on this guy.

-dante

sorry sweet pea, i wudda reviewed sooner but the stupid lil fictionpress review page wudnt load 4 a few days! but better i review l8 than never, no? (my motto on life. wuts the motto w/ u? *giggles*)
newayz, on2 more important stuff than me actin like a **.
well, like everythin else u write, i enjoyed it. &, like everythin else u write, ill explain y i liked it so u can get it in2 ur head that im not makin it up.
thr wasnt as much angst-driven drama as i expected thr 2 b. but thrs nutin wrong w/ that. im vry proud of u, ur so strong. im not sure if u realise that, but this poem, the way its worded, u sound vry strong even w/ wuts happenin. i know it ist really a happy poem tho, & thats shown well 2. u express ur emotions so well that im sure ne1 that knows u, or dusnt, that knows wuts goin on, or dusnt, can actually feel the emotions in themselves.
gr8 use of words. ur a true poet

~*tafi*~

Beautiful Loz! Love is a very inspiring innit? If this is what it does to you, may love be in your heart forever *huge comforting hug and kisses to you*

Chrissie

Oh hunni! Who is this for?? Alright, you know what you are going to do? And you WILL do it, aight? You are going to email me and tell me exactly who this is meant for and why, got it? Hehe. It was so beautiful. I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful a writer you are. You have so much talent. Whether it's your amazing stories or your perfect poems, you are so talented. I envy you! i do, i wish i could express things like you do, your awesome. I loved the part about the flowers blooming. Aw...psh, like i could ever come up wiht something like that! You are so amazing at writing poetry and this one is no exception. WONDERFUL.

Hey! Are you my doppelganger? I think we have like the exact same thoughts and feelings about unrequited love. I have a poem written similar to this one...but yours is terrific! The rhythm is really good, and it's full of emotion...Great great!

i like this poem a lot. I can really relate to this. I feel exactly like this (exept about a girl instead of a guy). I actually wrote my own poems on exactly the same thing. They are called: Dream World, The Door, and I want to tell you. Please read them and tell me about what yout think. (If you read both the door and I want to tell you, then read i want to tell you first because the door happens with the same girl after i want to tell you). But anyway, good poem. i really like it a lot.