I really liked the first chapter, I'll have to read more to see about the rest of the story, but there was one thing that bugged me. near the begining Aiden said that the pervious doctor was 'getting bulimia' when in fact, you cannot 'get' bulimia as if it is a diease you catch, but you can become belimic, as in it was a (bad) choice. Other than that great story

This is sucha god story! ehehehehehe i ♥ it so much! teheheeh ☺

Yay your alive! And you've come with an update! Wow even before I got to the end of the chapter as soon as I saw hospitol I knew she would be awake. He may not believe in Karma but I do and I hafta say it no matter how cliche it is but...Karma's a biotch.

Best chapter yet.

Yay, you finally updated after two centuries! We get to name the kitties, woo hoo! Since every cat has a different personality, you need a haughty one, so he/she only responds to "Your highness," even if his/her name is Biddy. Why that idea? My friend's cat is a haughty thing and she (the cat) won't let you touch her unless you do call her "Your highness." Oh and you can't kill yourself yet...there was a "To be continued" posted in that story, and that says it's not complete, so HA! YOU HAVE TO LIVE LOGNER! AH HAHAHAHAHAHA! fluffy? that poor feline.

That was long, but nice ^^ Hope the next update won't take so long XD Anyway, yea, the ** scene was good, but just cause everyone else uses '**' and such, doesn't mean you have to. There are a dozen other words to call it, if you want your intimate scene to be as classy as the rest of your story. It doesn't make a scene hotter. The only time I'd use vulgar words is when I write from a POV of a character who uses profanity all the time anyway, so yea... More soon! Kudos!

HEY WILL YOU UPDATE? YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN AGES. I LIKE THIS STORY.

*CACKLE SPUTTER...FULL OUT LAUGHING* OH GOD I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING...

I am in love with this story. No, seriously, I really, really love it. And I need more! I need to know what happens! (glomps you0 Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with Aidan on top? (snickers) Seriously though, I've put this on disc so I can read it whenever I want, and I've drawn fanart and I LOVE THIS STORY!

Ahh, great story here! I can't wait for an update. There's some wonderful characters /development, and I can't wait for more. Just a question, and I may be stupid for asking it, but we haven't seen the sadistic ex, or the Catholic grandfather yet, have we?

I am neither allowed to review the other chapter (5) or to go to chapter 1...since I've read it twice...update!! Why let it stop where it did in chapter 5!?! DO CONTINUE! :cute smile:

Interesting, really interesting! xD
I found your story in someone authors' favorite list and I look at the summary and decide that I just have to read it.
I like the plot, the characters, their interactions, their personalities and everything about them... XD
And yes Sudara reminds me of Grenouille, when I read about the ** of a woman with her period... I knew that reminded me of someone and when I read your author's note I knew it was Grenouille. (I don't really know why... XD)
This story is really great, so I beg you to keep writing... there are a lot of things unresolved that I want to know.
Is Yoshi's girlfriend ever going to wake up?
Why was Aidan in all those SM clubs?
Why did Aidan's boyfriends left him?
Who is murdering the artists?
It's gonna have an important part with the main plot, right?
Keep writing please!
Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

That was an awesome story. I love it, really, really, really, really, really love it, especially Aidan. IT's good work (writing is an art you know!) And thank you for mentioning the fact that the bible doesn't mention anything about homosexuality being wrong in an earlier chapter! Few people note that, but I will mention something and I think you'll understand: Sodom and Gamora. Anyway, keep it going! Can't wait to read what happens next.

I love Living a Lie. I'm especially in love with Yoshi. He sounds so cute and cuddly in a groping sorta way. Did that even make sense? Oh well, I'm sure you know what I mean. If you don't, gomen. I just wanted to say I like your writing style and hope you won't take long to update.
Ja,
LunaChic

I enjoyed the chapter, I really did. Make them go at it already! I vote for longer and more frequent updates! XD Okay, I know it's hardly possible, but sooner sounds better than longer...me thinks. Anyway, I thought Aidan was acting like such a girl, but he's still charming^^ I like Yoshi, tho, a real guy: horny, desperate and umm...horny. What else could you demand from a guy? XD;; Well, update soon, or I shall unleash a hoard of crazed clowns upon you!
Crazed clowns: *all drool over Aiden*
-_-; Um, yeah, but you get the point!

I must say that I adore...nay, LOVE Aiden. I can't wait 2 see wut he does 2 Sudara and I must agree that castration is a marvelous idea. No good bastard. I mean, don't get me wrong, I don't think he's a bad guy...except when it comes 2 the fashion sense, but Aiden and Yoshi r getting 2gether and no one can come between them! I must say I don't luv Sazuko that much, she's competition. It was also nice 2 see that fallin in love didn't change Yoshi at all. Wut a lovable lil nympho. I must say I luv the nymphos, they're a missunderstood, and fun, people. Well this chapter was well worth the wait, but keep them comming.