|Reviews for Living A Lie|
| r.mai 7/30/04 . chapter 5
SOON IS GOOD! Whoa! So much emotion this chapter! P C'mon now Aidan, you really have been hot and cold... i mean dude, you made Yoshi bawl his eyes out last chapter because of your cutting comments. ; don't overdo it. it could really frustrate our nympho friend. you're going to have to snag him for sure, and then have lots of sex! oh, and get him away from the landlord. i'm suprised you haven't been screaming bloody murder at the landlord for having raped yoshi. (even yoshi was technically willing, i'm calling it rape. smary git.) ha ha. oh and better watch out. yoshi promised to stay away from sudara BUT sudara didn't promise to stay away from yoshi. nice going sudara! sudara was an interesting character ... aside from his ehm... love for attention and *cough* "affection" ... he seems to care about yoshi. isn't it cute n sexy when they get all possessive? P not too overboard though... like obssessive freaks who REALLY would lock ppl away and stuffers. hope you update soon!
| r.mai 7/30/04 . chapter 4
eh lol. are you so sure about aiden being the uke? *gives yoshi a hug* you silly boy you. so much yoshi angst. XD but it's all gravy ish for now. cya next chapter!
| subtleline 7/27/04 . chapter 4
*sniffle* I luv that ending line...why can't he just say that 2 Aidan. Speaking of him I sense some more angstyness (is that a word) there. His past realtionships must have really scerwed him(ooh bad choice of words) up. They r soo cute here...like they've been together for years. Go Yoshi! Get ur man!
| subtleline 7/27/04 . chapter 3
oh...they're finally in bed together. Its a shame Yoshi had 2 get sick for this 2 happen. And wuts up w/ that bitch of a mom. Why must poor Yoshi b so angsty...common Aidan make him happy *wink wink* Chapter 4 betta have answers.
| subtleline 7/27/04 . chapter 2
Hikaru is the one who needs the therapy...damn jackass. And thanks for the interesting tidbit 2 use against some 'god fearing' idiots. Aidan really gained some character in this chapter...and btw I luved the hentai twins and Akane Tendo (Ranma 1/2). Why...tell me why my dear Yoshi must suffer so..I luv him...b nice 2 him! Well...chapter 3 here I came!
| subtleline 7/27/04 . chapter 1
Okay..I must say I luved ur Author's Note and that I definitely went YAY!. I LUV Yoshi...wut a sense of humor. and cocky too. Wait that didn't sound right...I must say I have a thing for long hair also. Well, Aidan is interesting and here I thought he was a good lil boy...well on 2 the next chapter!
| Kiera Namir 4/16/04 . chapter 4
Aww, come on! Don't stop here! This story is AWESOME!
| SenileYoukai 3/18/04 . chapter 4
Okay, that was so good I just read it all in one sitting!
Thank you for refrencing everything non-english at the end. I hate it when people just stick words, and such in their manga stories and expect everyone to be smart enough to figure it out!
Stalker -ish- the *cutest* kitty!
I feel bad for Yoshi, but thought that him getting sick and Aidan taking care of him was adorable!
Very interesting and fluffy! More fluff!
I need to find out what happens! Update, update, update!
| the Prince's Jewel 1/15/04 . chapter 4
*grumbles about being one of the stupid people who forgets to check the author alert box*
I missed two chapter because of that! At least I'd remembered to add it to favorite stories, or I'd've never found it again.
*taps bottom lip thoughtfully* Aidan seems to have done a complete one eighty... and why is Yoshi calling him master if he considers him a uke? I will go off and be confused some more. Another chappy anytime soon?
| SweetSun 12/20/03 . chapter 4
Interesting story, can't wait for more! Please update soon!
| Sheepie 12/19/03 . chapter 4
Beautiful story, can't wait to read more! I love Yoshi, and Aiden is so adorable. Teehee! Hikaru needs to die... I think I shall kill him ;; eh sorry, I have pyscopathic problems when it comes to people interfering with perfect yaoi pairings! Anyways, please update soon!
| Princess of Hell 11/27/03 . chapter 4
This is the best story ever ;_; ::sob:: it's so beautiful! I love the characters and and... it's just so ...so... pretty! ::clings onto story sobbing hysterically because who knows when it'll be updated again?::
| Olena 11/23/03 . chapter 4
*hugs you happily* Such a great chapter, sexiness, angst, kissing, hair obsession, naked Aiden...it doesn't get better than that! The last line was very good, as well as all the parallels with the Greek myth. Please write more, I really like this fic.
| r.mai 10/26/03 . chapter 3
aw... T_T poor Yoshi... his 'kaasan is so mean... XD ...hopefully u write more soon!
| Olena 10/22/03 . chapter 3
It was so heartwarming and touching, Aiden was really nice for a change I'm so in love with this fic, please update soon! Please? *puppy dog eyes*