yea, interesting format...I've actually never been to an airport...so I'm not sure of ur description.From what I know, it should more like the actual run-way, like if you were out there and you weren't suppose to be.lovely poem tho.

I thought the format was fine. The poem itself was excellent. Cookies!
~Lonni

Very angsty. Nice work.

-Seras

I like it! Shorter than your usuals, but just as effective- brief, to the point, and kind of menacing! Nice :p