Very nice work. The story is descriptive, well organized, and is entertaining. I'm impressed! So far, it's going great and I hope to see more soon! It's interesting in how you added a lot of Japanese names and phrases into the story. Anyways, keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight

Ah! I love it! You've got to add more right now! It's so cute! Anyways, good, no, great, job. Tell me when you update!

gabriellafaith

fun, fun. this is like a mix of comedy and tragedy, taking bits of both to create something better. i love teh idea of Seekers, Angels, and Destroyers and see a lot of room to expand this idea.

that said, a couple of points:

1. character bioswhat if you did all of them together at the end as a chapter by itself? when reading long sections, i feel it interrupts to flow of the story.2. Vella and Ryuuall the things that draw them together seems sort of like overkill. i, personally, think it might be better to have contact limited to brief encounters in the hall. that way there could be long periods of anxiety and stewing between meetings where feelings could be explored and things like that.

of course, its also good the way it is. those are just my ideas.

Colonel

WOW! -is amazed- THIS STORY ROCKS! Omg, I can barely believe it; it's so well done... You're a great writer, did you know that?I like your characters alot, the chemistry between Vella and Ryuu is great; I love how you are able to portray your characters that well!! Great job! Please do more soon!!

hello, paine! This is Yuna talking not Rikku. When are you going to update. Oh, which story are you working on next? Call me later on when you read this. When do you think she will change her password because I did this on Sunday, July 10, 2005? Bye.

I am seriously liking all your work... You are very talented. Each story is different but just as good!

Ahh... very nice prologue... I'll continue reading this! ^_^ Anyways, I'm pretty I'll love this plot since this is the type of plot I love to read! However, it'll be better if you make a few of the paragraphs shorter. See ya! ~the key of the twilight

why not update?? It's a good story. It'd be best if you also describe where they live and all so there isn't any confusion. Just keep updating! ^^ I can't wait for it to finish.

I like this story so far. It has a nice original story line, though that is to be expected at this site, :p.

Miyoko-chan

Once I read the first chapter I was like... THEY'RE IN JAPAN!Oi... I love the story, and the names. Lovely storyline, thus far. I feel the need to KNOW MORE! I can't wait to see how the story comes together ^^

hey this story's pretty cool! You should definitely keep writing it. Heh heh, Ryuu is especially an awesome character...but why did he decide to lock away his desire to kill? Explain plz and update soon!

By the way my Email is none of your damn buisness. But off that subject I think of all your stories Aura is my favorite. You know there seems to be a romantic connection between Ryuu and Vela but there's probably not. Oh make sure there is comedy because with out comedy, mysterious, and a little vionlence this story would suck like hell. Other than that this story ROCKS! So please continue listen to me CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE NOW! Your not continueing do it now your not listening I...

yea you updated! wich is kinda weird of me saying cause im reviewing on the same day i sent the other one. im just bored ok but it is good!

this is a good story pleas write more. i realy dont know what ells to say because i dont really like to review so feel special.write more. do you do fanfiction?

Oh man this is good! Please keep writing! What will happen to Vella next?