Emoticons to 'lick'? What the--oh right...:P

'But-are we the we that we were in the room'
--That bezz my favorite line right there. It's the
second time there was a redundant repeat of a
word/phrase (the first I think was 'a want for more,
for more'). But even if it's redundant, it's a good
redundant. It adds to the semi-awkward grace of this
poem's priceless meter. Mesa like it. ^_^

Then of course...I love how the last stanza ends with
a repeat of the first stanza's style. It puts
everything into a nice nutshell of a package, ready
for delivery.

Zing!

But--are we the we that we were in the room


Nice line.

Internet friends are in interesting thing, yes? Good work.

Interesting poem. What more can you say!

Her name is Randi
No, she's not green
Her name is Randi
She's just a little bit mean
Her name is Randi
A ride she cannot find
Her name is Randi
She's married to a mime


Oh, right. There's a poem I'm supposed to read, not you reading mine.
Very true stuff, you know.
Sums up everything about talking to others online is a short, simple style.
Of course, I had to look up "aural".
I really like the:
"Evolution, a suggestion
A phone call, progression"
It's just...good, in it's rhyming and the truth behind it.
You're good, very good. But you know that, and don't need me telling you that.
I just hope I can one day be half the writer you are.