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| Estelin 2007-06-16 ch 4,   | this story is great. keep up the good work and writing. can't wait to read more when it is up. |
| Ashley 2004-12-11 ch 4, | hey!!this storie*as well as ur others* is awesome! keep the chapters comming...cya! |
| Chibes 2004-08-21 ch 4, | Hello! **Cough, Cough** I'm sick so I decided to review your story. Why you may ask, Easy, It is fun. Why haven't you updated? I know you have written more then this. Well, I should get off before my loco parents find a way to kill me through the phone lines. I love the story of course as you already know! |
| The Merle Goddess 2004-01-01 ch 4, | YAY! You wrote more chappies! But, hey! Why did you stop writing that one story about the android? I liked that one! Oh well. Kirito is cute! Write more! |
| Leah 2003-12-20 ch 1, | totally awesome. but i'm into scenary description so same amount of talking and more description. (Kinata: Konnichiwa! I sent you a reviewer so no you have to update!! Tchus and auf wiedersehen!!) -Leah ^^ |
| Kinata 2003-10-19 ch 4, | You're so lazy. Whenever I see you next, I'm going to kick you in the shins. ... That maybe a long time but oh well. But hey, don't worry. Maybe your lack of morivation will prevent you from feeling the pain... Tchus and auf wiedersehen and I WILL see you later. -Kinata |
| Xiao Ling Li 2003-09-24 ch 1, | I really liked your story it was really good and write more when you get the chance to |
| MegumiReisui 2003-09-06 ch 3, | I love your story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Your story is soo good! I love it!! |
| MegumiReisui 2003-09-06 ch 2, | loved it. |
| MegumiReisui 2003-09-06 ch 1, | *exhales* wow.. |
| Kinata 2003-09-06 ch 3, | I'M GOING FOR IT! *laughs* The only sugar I had today so far was syrup with breakfast. And not that much I didn't think... Now you have to remember to do your part, Okey? |
| foxdance 2003-09-06 ch 3, | Still like the story. Kinda reminds me of Harry Potter, though. Anyway, it's the not the same, so that shouldn't be a problem. foxdance |
| foxdance 2003-09-06 ch 2, | Hmm, nicely done! The character's interaction are kinda realistic, so it's easy to be at ease with them Keep it up! Meanwhile, I'm gonna read more and post another review afterwards :) foxdance |
| a reviewer 2003-09-06 ch 3, | I'm sticking by my judgement...this does sound a bit like Harry Potter...just lighten it up a bit and it'll be fine... |
| Someone you know 2003-08-21 ch 2, | You know, this is starting to sound kinda like a Harry Potter remake. You're style of writing is pretty good, but you need to work on the dialogue |