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| Reviews for Past Horizon |
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   Mackenzie Rose 9/12/03 . chapter 16Amazing! Pirate stories rock and yours is definitely going into my favorites! Keep writing please! Mac |
| Ashlita 9/11/03 . chapter 16 Aw, Robert's in love with her. Poor guy, and poor her. That sure is a tough decision. Well, update soon. Ashlita |
| Ryoko.Kilala 9/10/03 . chapter 16 wooie! That was a good chapter (glad to see u finally up dated!_ Please update soon! |
| mellisau8 8/30/03 . chapter 15 lol, that would stink if she didn't get back...but then again there is roberyt, but that would still stink. anywho, this is all very suspenseful. Why in the world would helen be conected with the captain and stuff? Is she her grandmother or something? and what of fletchers grangdaughter? very confused. SO UPDATE SOON! excellent story |
| Carina 8/28/03 . chapter 15 Marvelous ending. Hope you write some more soon. |
| Liriel87 8/25/03 . chapter 15 lol just realizing what she has done has she? Good chapter! I like how you bring the Captain into it! Peachy good! Liriel |
| Liriel87 8/24/03 . chapter 14 Good chapter! Roberts a sweatie. Oh well. At least she has realized its the past. Liriel |
| Carina 8/21/03 . chapter 13 By George! This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read! I hope you put up those new chapters soon! |
| Strongwilledgirl 8/16/03 . chapter 13 Well...I love this part!The romance between Helen and Robert sure is burning!I think this part is quite sensual,you know...Anyway,have you ever thought about becoming a romance novel writer?Or...you're actually an accomplished writer right now?...Keep up the great job! |
| Ryoko.Kilala 8/16/03 . chapter 13 good story so far! Can't wait to see what happens after! Pleaze update as soon as possible! |
| praying piper 8/11/03 . chapter 13 its good. keep up the good work |
| mellisau8 8/10/03 . chapter 13 whoa! That was dramatic. and i thoght they didn't do anything! doi, i am very confused. According to the last chapter, they only lay there while helen was crying her eyes out, so unles they sleep naked...how did...the morning scene happen? and y was robert confused? i'm confused even more. ah! o well, just update soon! i mean, now. i don't care if schools tommorow (according to my schedule), they don't give u very much hw then, so update! |
| maddie 8/10/03 . chapter 13 i am loving this story. its great fun. your writing style is very fresh. just a question though, when is the fact that she has been thrown back in time going to come back up? it seems like she has forgotten that she is in the wrong time (i almost had). anyway please update soon. |
| Liriel87 8/10/03 . chapter 13 Well what a pleasant chapter. . . not! I liked it though, even if it was a bit dirty. . i mean like mud dirty just to let you know. Lol. Update soon! Liriel |
| Ashlita 8/10/03 . chapter 13 So, they did it after all? Hmm. Update soon. Ashlita |
