It's good. The rhyme works very well.

O, nice. Very thinkable... I think. Anyway, 'tis a good poem, and I like it.

Great minds think alike... I've felt that way too.
The metaphor of the tigers/dreams was a brilliant one. And the flow of words was incredible! I'm green with envy...

A joy to read, as always.

half the songs i write, (thats 2 of 4 for you who arent good at math) are about insomnia, so this poem struck a chord with me. I love it

That is amazing! I love this one...

*blinks*
Wow, talk about meaningful. That must have had some background.

More of ur stuff- I have found! *grins*

Wow. This is really moving stuff. I'm not sure whether this was written straight from the heart or not (sorry if that offends you) but I can feel a lot of pain behind this poem. Perhaps there is, perhaps there isn't, but that is what I see.
Well done for producing yet another astounding piece of wordly art.
Luvs Elfie x

Truly, this is a poem which explains insomnia like no other. I think it's the best descrip I've ever read. Only an insomniac can really understand it ^-^ Life is hard when sleep flits away so often.

- Crucified Sanctity -

Maybe insomnia is a disease that all poets? Talk about being able to relate... great job!

(Due to the fact I Still can't seem to login, this can't be a signed review.. Sorry)

Anyway, about the piece.. It reminded me so much of myself.. Its 12.21am here, and I just -know- its gonna be a sleepless night today.. The parts in brackets, just like your other pieces always make me laugh.. Its hah-- I can't find the word but its wicked humour in a way I guess.. I liked how you managed to rhyme so naturally while at the same time creating such vivid descriptions and images.. You describe insomia perfectly.. This is a work of art.. Really.. Its good, very good and I enjoyed it lots.. Amazing piece of work..

Wonderful. I know exactly what you're writing about. Insomnia is just wrong. argh. Well written, great little side remarks (smirk), and definately going on my favorites list! Great work. :D