oo... i hope you update soon!! i really liked it

I really need more! When are you going to update? I want to see Edna have some fun on the computer-- I hope that it doesn't just sit in the trailer unhooked. I have read these 3 chapters over and over I am hooked!! Please write more!

Thats really good, it was very well written, and I loved the whole flow of the story, a bit morbid, which is great. I like morbid stories, they keep you locked. It's really good, keep up the work!

good chapter.
now i see where earl gets his good manners.
this story is FAB, so update soon!
~Froggie0~
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i hate earl.
he's lousy and mean and cheap.
but this story is very, very interesting. i don't read many things like it. it's great.
~Froggie0~
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poor edna. i feel so bad for her.
earl is a fat, stupid, nasty, bum.
good beginning, with a slight cliffhanger. good job. keep it up!
~Froggie0~
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WOW! i really like the way this is written, sometimes it seems alittle to real,if that makes any sense? i'm a guy and im reading this,and i feel like I became Edna for a minute while reading this story! thats not always a good thing,cause i almost wet myself when earl grabbed the cat! ;) i'll be watching to see how this unfolds! but the perfect ending would be Edna morphs with a computer turns into a killer cyborg and beats Earl down like a little Beeotch!
TM

I liked this a lot. It flows nicely and Edna seems like a real person. Good job.

Please update the story soon, I love it.

I was a little concerned at the beginning that this piece was going to be another short cut woman-in-peril piece that swiftly ends with suicide, murder or some other ilk.

But you really sell this story, sell how Earl ensnares Edna, how Edna suffers. Congrats. It's pretty damn good. I feel what you want me to feel. I laugh at the right parts, get angry at the right parts, I anticipate as Edna anticipates.

The dialogue is pretty good, if a bit cruel. In a few places you lean too heavily on Earl's dialect, but I got through it.

I invite you to read and review my work in kind. Please let me know when the next chapter is up.

This is pretty good although I feel bad for Edna.

Wow, very well written. Cool. Cool. Keep writting, the world must have MORE!

Reine Faye

Very dark and depressing so far, but I really like the main character, and you really got me involved! I'm looking forward to finding out what's going to be changing...

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more.

I have a range of emotions from reading it and I really like the way it flows.

^_^

**blinks** wow...I liked that, cept it was a wee bit..morbid. But hey! That sometimes makes a story interestin'

Nice.