hi-ho! me again - i don't understand how i could have missed this one, either. i guess i just wasn't thorough enough the first time through! in any case, i LOVE it. splendid, splendid as per usual. and yay, the line fits beautifully!
p.s. no, i'm not. so there.
p.p.s. SUBMIT!

this is gorgeous. And you made excellent use of JD's line. :)

really though, this is one of your best poems.