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| Raven of Ice 2005-03-05 ch 4,   | This is really good. I love this. ~Rvn |
| waterfairy-rose 2003-08-13 ch 4, | hey k-shadowmoon i like what i was reading although at first it was quite confuessing but i got the idea i hope u continue you this but an idea is to put climax , tenison in the right parts. like the lorn dude he needed to have tension ect |
| Duchess of Serendair 2003-07-21 ch 3, | Oh Kirika I love this! It's so deep and romantic and whenever I read something so romantic I get all fuzzy happy inside lol. Thanks for reviewing mine, and update soon! |
| Li Li 2/15 2003-07-20 ch 3, | This is a good story. The element protectors and goddesses (their closeness) kind of makes the story poetic because they share the traits of their elements. And the feelings of the characters are still realistic even if they are reincarnated goddesses and such. They're still teenagers and they still have their doubts and wants things their way. Only thing: make sure you double check punctuation and spelling. Aura and Fang are so cute! Update soon, please. |