PLEASE UPDATE--I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND I NEED TO KNOW THE UPCOMING EVENTS!**this coming from the girl who hasn't updated "Car Ride" in over three years...lol!**Jocelyn

hm...it's been awhile since the last update...can't say that it holds a promising outlook that you may update any time soon then. but...it's an interesting story, to be sure. so i have some kind of hope that you do...

arg...its a cliff hanger! I really do want to see what happens, you story is brilliant so far. Great start!

Wow! Amazing - you have such a brilliant imagination. You are an awesome writer, bravo!

Im completely captivated, ive always loved sci-fi and this is neat

Did you really write that, or get it from a book? [ abit confused..and tired.]..Either or, its a really interesting view on the sun and the planets,this one definately looks captivating. Good work.

And a small voice cries from the depths of despair, lingering on the air in its high-pitched whistle, "Update me!"
Subaru: That was the worst thing you've ever written.
Ann: Shoosh, you.
Subaru: *sweatdrop*
Ann: ANYhoo, I really wanna know what happens in this story, m'dear. ^-^ And I figured it should have at least as many reviews as Twilight Rein. xD

All I can say is HOLY **! Lol... you are really talented to be able to write such a variety of different types of stories. This one is really good so far, I especially love that someone would care enough about something to degrade themselves the was Zavier plans to. It shows a devotion that I can only relate to my singing in myself... I love the stage. Hehehee... melodramatic, thats me! anyways ttyl

wow. This is amazing. I am really loving this ^^ Keep writing this ^^

Mage Kitty ^^

Yes, Mistress...
**hypnotized**
anywho, nice start.
Hey, what ever happened to that story about that guy and the Dortha'Kasol?
I liked it!
Also, please continue this. It is really good!

Interesting.

No doubt this will happen soon enough, quite alot sooner than the fourth millenia. Unless, of course, the same thing that happened in A Wind Named Amnesia (good movie).

And why does everyone BUT me gets reviews? *sob*

Wow. Very good, you have my applause! I suppose we find out just what Zavier has planned to DO on earth, ne? And more characters. ^-^ Gotta love the idea of slash. Though, if it's an original, story, it's not technically slash. Slash means you're writing a fanfic. It's writing someone ELSE'S characters. Your own characters being gay is just that: being gay. *shrugs*

Shamless Plug: Since you're writing a story like this, I presume you're into things like this. So check out a story of mine and Katy's! It's under the Pen-name "Twisted Revolution" and is called "Twilight Rein". There's a side story (purely yaoi. . .somewhat shota-kon. . .okay, totally shota-kon), too called "My Immortal". Yes, it's based off the Evanescence song.

Hope for more soon!
Ann

Meep!! The sheep smiles pleasently!! I liked the funness and the wonderfullness and ::goes on for hours::! Anywho...It was prettily (prettily?) written!! And now with the threat of spork jabing if no updateing is seen!! ::brandishes said spork::

This is good and I especially like the first chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter.

*swoons dramatically* How could I not resist the gentle crooning of the review button?

YAY! Before I throw my thoughts into a blender and blast it at you with that...firehose I keep in my back pocket, (wait...did that come out wrong? O_o)
I have to say, "WOOT! I got a medal! My first one *wipes a tear from eye*
Yes. I am a high achiever *coughs and looks at bottomless pit of "unexplained abscense" notes.

OK, as to the chapter. You gave a good, yet small introduction to this new character yet enough substance to help the viewers see and begin to understand his personality and his intentions. Not that the storyline is predictable. It's totally original and I commend you for that.
I'm brimming with questions but I'm unsure of asking them...so, I'll withhold the proverbial tiger from attacking you. (bwahahaha, *sends out proverbial flea instead*...Infiltration at it's finest >=D)
Anywho. All of this babble indicates with a large flashing neon finger that I liked the chapter and I cant wait until he gets to Earth and the chaos unleashes. Or pink monkeys, or worse "The Teletubbies" come out to play.
I love this post-apocalyptic stuff...

Continue, and have a good vacation!

~VS