This is really good! Thanks for your review, by the way, and if you want to be my beta reader, that'd be great! i thought i had someone, but he never actually sent back what I gave him... so... that'd be great! ^_^

Things aren't always what they seem, but when they are, you never know whether it is the truth or that it is all a lie...

Again, amazing portrayal of the fact that everyone has their own problems... and that you can't judge someone until you REALLY get to know them, because chances are they're never showing who they really are. You truly are gifted in writing. I bow down to you.. hehe.

Wow, and you thought my stuff was good, this is...amazing, and so downright true, i love how you totally caputred a classroom, great job!

It's all fragments as well, you know.
I think you could really make it into a bigger story, but then again, I like it just the way it is. A bit vague, but with as much feeling as it could ever have. Lovely.

Another great story...this one is a bit more uplifting then the others but still a bit on the angsty side. You are reiging Queen right now.