Very good work! I've felt like that sometimes, good job :)

Keep writing.

very sad, love the last stanza on this one, good floow to it too, its interesting and very self pitying, but that last stanza, i dunno, gave it a very different feel to the whole thing, muchly enjoyed, excellent job

i know how *that* feels. good portrayal!

aw,that's really nice.i think everyone needs someone that actually would give that person instant happiness i guess.

hey again, great story I feel exactly like that ALOT! and I just wanted 2 tell you that I have written 2 more poems so please read and review them!

eh, very exaggerated indeed goods anywasy! :D :D

that's really good!

Nice work.

Heart of the Sword

This was good. I tried to write something like this but I failed P ... You did a good job on it _

I know how you feel, even with the exaggerations. Like sometimes, no one cares. I loved the last line, keep it up! :D

Wow, it is a good poem. I hope it is exxagerated : ). Keep writing