Reviews for Anything to Breathe Again

Tina 2004-08-29 ch 1,	hey... nice story...continue it if its possable..well write more so then i can have somin to read..
pieces 2004-03-28 ch 1,	As far as grammar and place-in-time goes, this piece tends to jump around a little. Other than that, the writing style flows really well, and the overall concept is sheerly amazing. The promise at the end may have been slightly anticipated, but it still had full impact, and I was very moved. Fantastic job - don't ever stop writing. ~Gabby
jupiter-jazz 2003-12-13 ch 1,	Oh my god... that was so haunting and sad. You're so happy at school, why are all of your stories so sad? Great job, though. I really loved it!
frozenwithin 2003-09-27 ch 1,	don't lie to you. ok. it SUCKED. just kidding! it totally fit my mood of silent darkness... so dark...i like it! Death as a person is a very interesting concept.
Arianna Wings 2003-08-28 ch 1,	Hey! I didn't know you could write like this. You're way more hyper when you're in school. Ok, I guess I'm not the one to be talking, since it probably makes me look like an idiot. But whatever. I really liked it. Choai! Zel, the Hyper Maiden in the Tower. lolz.
AVIGON 2003-07-21 ch 1,	Well, my first remark would've been that the spacing's a bit screwed... But you took that from me, so: the story's original (as far as anything can ever be "original", you write well and um... the spacing's a bit screwed. ;o)