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| Dragen Eyez 2004-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat made me shudder a bit, imagining that.. especially the ending line. truely a horrible thought.. yet so often true... "He's no stranger" I like that you kept that simple and basic, which really drew my attention to it and just sort of halted my thoughts to just that one as everything else from the poem came crashing down around it. |
| HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect 2003-08-02 ch 1,  | abusereally good, though not with your usual rhyme scheme,. you still pulled it off and looked damn good doin it ^__^ theres a reason your one of my fav authors yknow ^_^ |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was terribly chilling. It was just like at the end I was like OMG> THe whole thing was very suspenceful everything you'd want in a story wrapped up into a delightful little poem. I was overjoyed to see you updated dear. |
| Incubabe 2003-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot - the concept is really good and although the rhyme is a little shaky it's really well written!! Good work! Diana x |