Wow. Awesomely awesome.

You write well. Just in the first few paragraphs I felt a special connection between Shasha and her father. It's very good.

Oh my trixy dear this is one of your best, in my opinion, although i'll admit i havent been keeping up with any of the other stories that you may have written while i've been off galavanting... oh yes the story im reviewing.. lovely and hopelessly romantic, or romantically hopeless, or something. And it seems as though i'd like to know what happens next, but the story seems over, oh well...

Insomnia.. I know thee a bit. I don't usually read romance but... it can from you, and on top of that, it has those interesting word choices that you use, and great description. Is this going to be a series of yours, or is it going to be a one time thing? I'll be back to read on if it continues.