 Lidless Eye 2003-07-21 . chapter 1This was really interesting! Had its own unique style to it. Great job. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2003-07-21 . chapter 1cute |
 Mime 2003-07-21 . chapter 1It's such a miracle what can happen afterwards if you just hold onto that 'thin thread' for a while. |
 Punky Monkey 2003-07-21 . chapter 1good poem. keep writing! |
 LaChoclaNilla 2003-07-21 . chapter 1I like the form of it |