Ok you our definettly a poet, and this poem proofs it, keep writing.

Your rhyming was excellent. It didn't sound forced whatsoever, and the message of the entire poem was awesome. Final stanza was just incredible. Keep writing!

Hey, thanks for reviewing my poem. As for yours...GREAT job. Easy to read, nice rhyme scheme, but the nuances and the meaning is very deep. Your are VERY good at poem-writing. A natural talent?

Great. Wonderful rhythm, and the flow is just perfect. Great job. I'm speachless.
Alexandra.

omg...i LOVED IT...that was beautifully written w/ good rhyme and i thought that the overall message was... well, i lost the word, but i your poem was great and you should most definately write more *clapping* :-D
~Anesta