I love the lingering feeling.

Wow! That's incredible. I love the branch off of the modern meaning of the word, i felt every word. Good job

I... I can relate to this. Wow. -applause-

I really like this; it has a really ominous ending that sticks with you.

Ohmygod. That is me right there. No amount of words can I use to describe how much this has touched my heart. It's just that amazing. I loved reading it. Good job with writing this. This is just so sad and well-written

Is this the past of yours/anyone.

cool

I really enjoyed this. Very sad and a beauty.

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Liked it :).

This is beautiful in so many ways. I'm not a big fan of poetry, but for some reason, this speaks to me. The imagery you create is lovely and amazing. Everything flows perfectly and the words fit together like a puzzle. Well done!

Hey! I am here to share some exciting news. This story has been added to the Poetry category over on A Drop of Romeo!

Here's the Review:

"Helen Thinks: “Ghost” is a simple, but powerful, poem written by Etaine Shadowheart that I think most of us will be able to understand, to be able to relate too. “Ghost” is about being invisible in High School and the way Etaine Shadowheart writes it is breathless. They hit each moment perfectly, their description painting a perfect scene. Even if they had not made it obvious what it was they were talking about, I think the readers still would have been able to pinpoint the hidden meaning behind “Ghost”. It’s a read that anyone could be able to relate too, even if popular kids in High School can be invisible in High Schools; their persona a facade just so they can fit in. This is a poem that will hit the memories of many; especially me; and a poem that will be added to my favourites so I can read it again and again."

Keep Writing,

Helen xo

That's so sad! It's such a meaningful and beautiful poem!

This brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you.

holy fucking shit i love that poem