Very good. I love your POV switch from the norm.

I like it, both recognizing the isolation in feeling left out and unifying everyone who identifies with the poem. Very well constructed. My only criticism would be your punctuation. It may just be me, but somehow I don't feel the power of your usage of it towards the end of your piece as much as I do that feeling that rules have been broken, you know? My suggestion would be to use a couple more line breaks instead, but of course, you're the author. Loved it though, it reminded me very strongly of my high school years. Good job!
-J

Beautiful.

Beautiful

deep true
now i know the word for what i am

...a gohst

Love it, how you change the meaning. I never thought about it like that before.

Wow... that's like... an embodiment of my thoughts exactly. You put them to words beautifully. Great job.

nice...it really makes you think...

wow, great

I love how you strip away the image that many have of ghosts then suddenly BAM! You tell it straight, you reveal the ghost!
A very interesting idea, especially that last line after asking directly "Want to find me?"

Keep up the good work!

=]

I must say... Brilliant.

And I am one of those students. :)

This? Is moving, and so true.

Hmnn...

Thoughtfully meaningful in a double perspective way, just the right dose of angst, and a fantastic choice of words. I would say that this is one of those great poems that I will remember for a long time. Especially the last line; "Turn around, and stare into the faceless crowd." That was the perfect ending to finish off the poem.

Have you ever read "The Blue Girl" by Charles de Lint? This poem reminded me of that book.

Anyway, that was just wonderful. An instant favorite. ^^

wow! Very strong poem, i loved it!

wow wonderful poem =]