deep true

now i know the word for what i am

...a gohst

Love it, how you change the meaning. I never thought about it like that before.

Wow... that's like... an embodiment of my thoughts exactly. You put them to words beautifully. Great job.

nice...it really makes you think...

wow, great

I love how you strip away the image that many have of ghosts then suddenly BAM! You tell it straight, you reveal the ghost!

A very interesting idea, especially that last line after asking directly "Want to find me?"

Keep up the good work!

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I must say... Brilliant.

And I am one of those students. :)

This? Is moving, and so true.

Hmnn...

Thoughtfully meaningful in a double perspective way, just the right dose of angst, and a fantastic choice of words. I would say that this is one of those great poems that I will remember for a long time. Especially the last line; "Turn around, and stare into the faceless crowd." That was the perfect ending to finish off the poem.

Have you ever read "The Blue Girl" by Charles de Lint? This poem reminded me of that book.

Anyway, that was just wonderful. An instant favorite.

wow! Very strong poem, i loved it!

wow wonderful poem ]

All too true, and well-written. Have you read Charles de Lint's THE BLUE GIRL? You would like it.

amazing.

That's really brilliant. Like, really really brilliant. I loved it, and I espcially liked how you build up the poem to the actual "definition" of the ghost. It's a really original idea. Good job.

Wow this is unbelievable. It's just amazingly awesome. Great write!