|Reviews for Ghost|
| more than average 12/30/08 . chapter 1
now i know the word for what i am
| stolen hugs 11/29/08 . chapter 1
Love it, how you change the meaning. I never thought about it like that before.
| Midoribon 10/9/08 . chapter 1
Wow... that's like... an embodiment of my thoughts exactly. You put them to words beautifully. Great job.
| Inspiring-And-Rebelling 6/16/08 . chapter 1
nice...it really makes you think...
| Tomorrow in Tokyo 5/16/08 . chapter 1
| painted eyes 5/14/08 . chapter 1
I love how you strip away the image that many have of ghosts then suddenly BAM! You tell it straight, you reveal the ghost!
A very interesting idea, especially that last line after asking directly "Want to find me?"
Keep up the good work!
| Peanuts Factory 4/25/08 . chapter 1
I must say... Brilliant.
And I am one of those students. :)
| on the line 1/23/08 . chapter 1
This? Is moving, and so true.
| Balliett 1/8/08 . chapter 1
Thoughtfully meaningful in a double perspective way, just the right dose of angst, and a fantastic choice of words. I would say that this is one of those great poems that I will remember for a long time. Especially the last line; "Turn around, and stare into the faceless crowd." That was the perfect ending to finish off the poem.
Have you ever read "The Blue Girl" by Charles de Lint? This poem reminded me of that book.
Anyway, that was just wonderful. An instant favorite.
| lordelfy 12/14/07 . chapter 1
wow! Very strong poem, i loved it!
| lilyqueen777 10/18/07 . chapter 1
wow wonderful poem ]
| Guarded Silence 6/26/07 . chapter 1
All too true, and well-written. Have you read Charles de Lint's THE BLUE GIRL? You would like it.
| YellowLilac 5/27/07 . chapter 1
| waterlemons 3/24/07 . chapter 1
That's really brilliant. Like, really really brilliant. I loved it, and I espcially liked how you build up the poem to the actual "definition" of the ghost. It's a really original idea. Good job.
| Isabella22 11/7/06 . chapter 1
Wow this is unbelievable. It's just amazingly awesome. Great write!