This is a very deep poem. It is well writen and the topic is something I have not seen very ofthen. You ahve alot of writing talent. keep it up.

Another good poem. You raise some good points here. I especially liked the third stanza. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Its has a thought provoking ending.. I liked how the piece flowed as well as the theme explored.. Lol-- I understood this one.. Anyway, cool.. It gives the reader lots to think about.. I loved the third stanza.. Nice job..

Nifty! I like this! I would suggestion changing the first and second lines in the third stanza. I would change run to running and fight to fighting, but I know doing that might kind of mess up the feeling you're trying to get a cross. but other than that, I really like it! Keep it up!

its a very good poem and i cant wait for more new stuff from you!

Thank you for your gorgeous review, a very inspirational piece.

Love them all,

:0 :)

Love Laura