Reviews for All Because of Daddy

Well-Worn-Chaos 2003-08-20 ch 1,	hn. Father's like that deserve to be hunted down, tortured,... tortured some more and after maybe.. a weeks worth of -extensive- torturing.. then death. two of my closest friends had to deal with ** like that. Sick. Sick people are in this world. However you're writing is really good ^_^;. ... eh... I like this story, then again its rare that i find one of your stories i dont like...
Willow 2003-07-25 ch 1,	Oh my...no words can express my sympathies. So very sorrie this had to happen to her. I guess dats wut they all say, ne? All in all, the writing of da storie is good. can't say da same thing for da topic. Write da same in English class and I'm pretty sure you'll pass with flying colors. Not a lot of people can capture emotion in a storie. I'm impressed.
AVIGON 2003-07-22 ch 1,	At the end of the first part, the narrator/focalizer-relation seemed a bit off, which bothered me a bit. Other than that: it's good how you managed to write this story without making it sound vulgar, and over the top. Nice.