aai! i haven't reviewed this yet - could could i have not? in any case, GORGEOUS, as always. i still think you should submit! (pub-lish, pub-lish, pub-lish!)(that was that annoying chant-y peer pressure type thing there.) right. ciao!
p.s. SUBMIT! (the poems, i mean.)

this is fabulous. again, your use of words... astounds me, to say the least. You're really a great writer. this poem is just one illustration of that.