That is such a sweet poem...i love it.
the way you can get it to rhyme and have full content (hence your sn) is just amazing!
Keep on writing!
ur reader,
autumn leaves and oranges

Another fantastic piece! You are an amazing writer! Keep up the good work.

~*~AbunaiChikara

ahh...i wish i were in that place, so peaceful, far from the troubles of this world, safe in the arms of the loving Father...heaven, our true home... anyway, great job! keep up the superb work!

The repetition is what instantly caught my eye. That's one thing you do so well in this poem... not to mention its basic sweetness and endearment. I think that four stanzas is just fine for a poem like this... maybe three, but five might have been overkill. You can only be so sentimental... except me, cause my stories are sentimental 24/7! Anyway, excellent work, and an awesome love poem.

Aw! Beautiful. Love the repetition of "A place" at the beginning of each stanza. That was great.

A very beautiful poem. The end is terrific!

This was really sweet and it is so true.


~Heart of the Sword

*grins stupidly at the last line* aw... wow... hehe I like this... what a complement wouldn't that be!

Aww, that is a sweet poem, and I don't usually go in for sentimental stuff. Well written with the last line adding a certain spark and flair of creativity to the rest of the poem. Very good.