You never stop amazing me. Excellent excellent work!

~*~AbunaiChikara

well written, insightful. i like this a lot! keep on writing!

I really loved your ryhming in this, more than in your other work... it didn't sound forced in the least, and that's a true compliment to your abilities. The last stanza was truly incredible... what a message! Your creativity never ceases to amaze me. The fifth stanza reminded me of my poem "Fields Of Snow"... check it out, and see what I mean.

Fantasticalitness work. Even though that's not a word. ::Grins::

This was really lovely.


~Heart of the Sword

Such a beautiful mental image created with this one... lovely.

good poem. so true. keep writing