This was a beautiful piece and you did an excellent job on it!

~*~AbunaiChikara

very beautiful and sweet. very true, i know it. great job! keep up the good work!

This was powerful, plain and simple. But, what you said had such truth and even encouragment to your readers. I think the final line was one of the most bittersweet lines I've ever read. It's true: we do have to throw ourselves at God's feet, and He, in His glory and majesty, always provides and sustains. Excellent, once again.

This was really great. You got the emotional aspect down so well.


~Heart of the Sword

This is good... something that struck me is not so much of what's been said, but rather what's not being said... *shrugs* Such a beautiful illustration of one's emotional state leaves a lot of spaces open, keeping the feelings that go with the state a mystery.

I can definentaly relate to this. A while ago life seemed to lose meaning, but I found it again through God. Nice job, keep writing.

Very well written, a good subject which has been well expressed. You certainly have a way with words. Good job.