This was a brilliant piece of work! :)

this is a pretty stunning piece of writing that i can relate to. great...

*hugs Loz* *wipes tear* i don't really know what to say, except, you know i'm always here for you right? *hug* Anything you ever need, i'll do everything in my way for you. *hug* Wonderful poem. You're so good at expressing emotions! *hug* Luv ya Lozzy!

This is truely something amazing Elfie, you've made your thoughts flow seemlessly onto paper/computer. I rarely get this close to raw emotion and when I do (like in phoenix rising) it's never this poetic.

Masterpiece.

as i sed a minute ago on another poem or urs, u definitely kno how 2 use words 2 express ur thoughts, & heart. & u keep on prooving it. excellent. keep feeling, keep writing.

-dante