That was adorable! So funny, cute, and to the point. Loved it! I thought the ending was fine, ;3 Keep up the good work!

aww! cute! but they are so spacey...

um well i think after almost two years it's pretty obvious you're not going to update this but i'm still confused. why isn't sam mad about tom kissing that girl? they haven't even talked about it. I would personally be ** if some guy kissed me then ran off and kissed some other girl. Liked the story though!

The end? If so, it's nice. If not, I'd say it would be a little drawn out. However.

Heh heh .. 'Well, quite frankly, I’m glad my paper clip hit him, in fact, I wish it had been a rock instead…and I wish it had hit him where the sun don’t shine. Note to self: carry rocks in trouser pockets.'

Interesting. One point - there was a bit too much use of:

'Tom'

(insert mental chuntering here)

'Tom'

(more mental chuntering)

'Sam'

(more mental chuntering)

But anyway. Good, short fic :)

'So that’s what interrupted Tina’s little speech. Them!' - maybe just me but I don't remember the speech ebing interrupted..

MS Word is ignorant. Ignore.

I'm aware I quote too much: nasty habbit, but these lines:

'And she’s…she’s…she’s hugging me and telling me everything will be okay. That he’s an ** and deserves to die. And…I’m crying. Oh God. Why didn’t I get drunk? At least I wouldn’t feel…'

Nice image of my friend's house and put me in that position so well. I really loved those. I think I've read this before, numerous times, but it's readable. I'm enjoying. Lovely ending to chapter.

“Have you looked in the mirror Sam? You’re looking pretty gorgeous tonight and as it was he was finding it difficult to refrain from jumping you…I guess, you licking him wasn’t a good idea…”

I like reading this. I also liked those line section - really brought up an image of the character. Gotta love the not-noticing gorgeous ones, haven't you? :)

haha, it's really cute. It's one of those nights where so many things happen they're stories in the themselves. I like that you confined it to the party.

lol, that was so hilarious

*laughs* sorry, but for some reason, i felt like laughing the entire time i read your story. just like regular guys. so perfect. *g*

Yay! So good! hey hey. Cute, funny, and totally mushy guys making out in a closet... It's gota be good for you!

I LOVE IT! Love it, love it, love it. ~glomptackle~ Awesome sauce all the way!!
I could totally see myself inside the character, ya know? Yeah...
~Sasa

heh. ^^ yay, they made up. although tom most certainly does not deserve to die... a bit drastic... but yay ^^ ... so why did he kiss that girl again? i don't think we ever got there... but oh well they made up! and sam lol... i doubt you could make a telephone if you had all the proper materials ... and even if you did... i'm assuming there's no phone jack in there.

scheming girls are things you must fear most in the world. o.O remember sam! let him apologize, buy you extremely nice gifts and apologize before you guys move on to the amazing make up sex ^^; or make up snog ha ha

hm... tina and marissa... no wonder she has so much power lol. *pats sam* don't forgive him until he grovels... when a man you love does you wrong, make him grovel like hell before you forgive him. ^^