Ah..very nice the different point of views. And somehow, in my mind, they SOUNDED like different people, too. Grammar mistakes here and there, but nice chapter!

Okay. I am going to assume that Rachela is the younger sister. And that Jonny is also younger that this as-yet unnamed character because it wouldn't make sense if she was the middle child and the youngest and oldest are Paul's.
Good job so far. As she is thinking, I'd say her repetitive thoughts are very realistic. I like how you describe the scenery in the last chapter. *thumbs up* Looking forward to more chapters.