Oh, and you never finished it... *cries*

People have mood swings so fast this story's giving me whiplash...

First, a ton of people who have been waiting centuries for revenge for a crime that they were willing to kill over just have to hear "I say everyone deserves a second chance" and suddenly all their anger is gone? Then secondly Kain/Seraph gets all furious in the blink of an eye for no apparent reason? He got mad for a reason earlier, but there at the end, there wasn't much to spark it, since it doesn't look like he actually remembered anything.

I was wondering if I was going to have to point out that 'seraphim' is plural, glad you addressed that.

And it took him *this* long to think to look up 'seraphim' on google?

This is kind of like reading the first volume of a manga. Starts out fairly ordinary, but quickly escalates into tons of action and intros tons of characters, and I almost never finish the first volume feeling like I've understood it. But I always come to understand as the story goes on, which I hope will be the case here as well. I'm definitely interested, that much is for sure.

write more i wasn't going to read this but then i got caught up and then you stoped writting i shall die of heart break

I totally like the plot and the story movement.

I hope you update the story soon, and I hope soon means almost Now! (^_^)

*blinks a few times* what the hell?

Random Fangirls (tm)?

*shakes head*

Well, now. The first part of that was rather confusing. Pretty much clear down to where we discover that Kain got told to act like nothing happened. Tossed in a loop or two there, didn't you? *Points to the above *...*'s* *shakes head* Random Fangirls (tm)... I wonder how long it will take to get that out of my head.

I went back and read the whole story, you see, so the first part of this chapter was kind of like: Huh? What? Where did that come from, where did he go and HUH?!

An' also, unless I read something incorrectly, you've got angels being androygenous in one place and Yasuo being an angel in another about to do something he should be physically incapable of. *is confused on that*

As for other things, *blinks* WHAT THE HELL YOU KILLED KAIN? (kinda an instinctive response...) *moves to author notes*

Lots of chapters is never a bad thing, unless it is lots of bad chapters. Your chapters are pretty good. I think this one is the only one that had my poor head all confused. Not exactly following all the Greek god bits either, but it's a common theme in all chapters, so I'm expecting it will make sense eventually.

*blinks* Well. Uh, see ya in August!

Great story, though the plot seems to be random at times. It is also difficult to understand why Kain presents such a threat, since everybody seems more interested in finding multiple partners. I think Kain and Haru will make a good couple. I 'll be sure to check in for furhter developments.

blargh

i will now kick your ** to death

AUGUST! THIS IS BALONEY! GIVE US MORE NOW! I love you.

:p

Wonderful story, and I swear if you don't finish a chapter a heck of a lot sooner than August I will hunt you down and...and... do something horrible! *shifty eyes*.But really, please continue! This is SO going on my fav's list!

Wormy

Oh man! I feel like I ought to join them Random Fangirls club! *waves a yaoi rulz flag* Me wants pictures of nakkid Haru! MOU! XD;; Anyway, I loved the kissing scenes, so delicious ~_~ I hope Kain's gonna be okay tho. Update soon, ne? Hopefully before August! *glares and kickes yer muses* Work you lil things, work!

heavens!How can you stop at such an exciting part?! Please continue,or else.."me dies"

Hey,
Oh man, why did I forget about this story...oh yeah, school ^^; Well I was snooping tonight and came across it again! And holy hell you're a fantastic writer! I obviously didn't read close enough! And for that I will beat myself in the head with my enchanted keyboard!...or maybe not, I got work Monday.
Anyway, amazing chapter! I haven't been this confused and interested since I read Angel Sanctuary! *scratches head*...man, that didn't make a bit of sense...hmm.
Anyway, G-R-E-A-T chapter and I'll try to read the rest soon. I feel kind of guilty since you always review my fic when ever I post it. I'm sorry! But your writing is so much better than mine!
It's so wonderful! *passes out on keyboard*
Ja ne!
*K*D*

o.o Well, I admit that this is the first story I've read that pulls that particular twist. Kudos for originality.
... still, I maintain that you are an evil, evil authoress. :P *huggles Kain* Although, the naked Haru with the spiffy eyes was some consolation. ^_~ *grin* And Makoto is still vera cute.
So, overall good chap. Well written, as always, and a little lighter on the mind-screwage than the last couple. Good balance there. Lovely job, can't wait to see what you've got coming up next!
Luff,
Lilias

Why do you have to leave it at a cliffhanger for? Darn you and the cliffhanger... write the next chapter quickly... please!

o_O;; *blinks* *gasps* *blinks*
*whacks you* How could you?! OMG! A eunuch?! Poor Kain, my poor poor baby! *mourns over the loss of...his dignity* Turn him back, you evil bishi mistress! Or I shall unleash my wrath upon you! *glares*
On a lighter note, I lurved nakkin Haru, so cute! *huggles the daylight out of him* So purrfect^^ Go Haru-kun! *waves a little flag with chibi Haru on it* You're #1!