Reviews for Blazers And Eyeshadow

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Sam 2008-04-28 ch 24, anon.	abuseOkay, Stevi. It's been over a year since you updated. You're driving me nuts. =[
erin2468 2008-04-11 ch 24,	abusewow this is awesome. so many dirty secrets! i love it! hope you update soon! =D
jaybriel 2008-04-09 ch 24,	abusewow, beautiful twist...I think that, and this whole chapter just elevated this entire story up another level. I never would have seen this coming, but to be honest, now that it's come, I couldn't imagine it happening any other way. Aidan and Lysander really are beautiful. Just wow.
Ruby 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is just like a plot that was taken from a shounen ai/yaoi manga... It's written somewhat juvenile-ish...but this is only the first chapter...maybe it'll get better eventually?
Queen of the Rouges 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseOh, interesting and quite refreshing. I must say, I've found so many badly written stories on here as of late, I was beginning to lose hope. Congrats though: you've reestablished my faith in this site, haha. I love your reading and simply must read more. ^.^
FrankieG 2008-01-04 ch 24,	abuseLOVE the twist!ive always wanted lysander to end up with aidan..they're perfect 4 each other
Duuude 2007-12-13 ch 24,	abuseOK. Some stupid damn computer glitch messed up my comment. Argh. I wrote a nice long one too. Yeesh. This abrupt change of pace had me seriously hooked. Uriah's dead? Bradley's in jail? Uriah and Gabe were the Radio Dudes?! WTF? Lysander and Aiden?! Aiden's become a prostitute?! XD He's not a prostitue but he's not the same person he was before either. He was never this involved with the council's dealings. Xavier has broken his heart. How could he? With a wife and a child. That's just despicable. There's no way he could possibly convince me that he should be forgiven. Poor Aiden is just yearning to be loved though.. Sigh. =[ Anyway. The real action's coming, I can feel it. The school's in an uproar. There's nothing to do but to fight with that damned council of crazies now that the pack leader's gone. Lysander should just give up. He's hurt and all but against a whole school, there's nothing to do but sit back. You know, the whole stay out of the way or be killed kind of thing. And the cigarettes.. Heehee. That supports the whole stereotype about boarding school boys. Haha, smoking and all. Aiden, Aiden, Aiden.. He's changed but then so has everyone else. Lysander, Gabriel, and even Xavier.. Sigh. So soap opera-esque and yet I love it. And your name was purely hilarious. French Boys Are **. xD Write more soon. This would make a great book. It is a book, but I mean published and all. People would read it. I would buy it. Great work, until next time. =]
Duuude 2007-12-10 ch 7,	abusehoowee. That was great. And hot. Woah. Teehee. Sorry. I don't know why I just giggled.. Somedays I act like a little preteen, haha. You wouldn't know. Maybe you would. But I digress. Great story. Read some more later. =]
jacob larson 2007-10-02 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is pretty cool. i love aiden and Gabriel.
Headline Whore 2007-09-24 ch 24,	abuseI feel utterly shocked at how the story is progressing. I really was a huge fan of this story and I loved the way the characters interactions were with each other. But sad to say, the quality of the chapters have largely deteriorated and I'm not quite sure I'll ever get past that to read on. Firstly, the stunning qualities that make your characters THEM are all but robbed. Now every action Lysander/Aidan/in fact, EVERYONE makes is painful to read. The plot "twist" isn't a twist at all, but it's more of a brutal manipulation to make it something even more complicated. I do understand that you said FictionPress is more of a feedback forum, but how exactly are you going to proclaim that you are indeed an author when you keep your descriptions and main storyline so brief and almost bullet-pointed? It doesn't seem fair to both the reader and yourself: You seem to be always putting off rewriting and correcting your mistakes, while the reader reads a story that isn't fulfilling at all. You have a great talent. And it's so obvious in the first few chapters. I just hope that you get back into that style of writing. =]
A Confused Kiwi 2007-08-03 ch 24,	abuseSimply amazing. I don't think there's any other way of catergorizing this story. It is by far one of my favorites. ♥ Kiwi
mia5081 2007-07-24 ch 24,	abuseI'm in love with your story. Really, I am. As I'm reading it, it's like a whole different world (which I guess is what you were going for lol), and it keeps everything interesting. I feel so bad for Uriah, but in all honesty, you did give us enough warning that Bradley was, well, psycho to put it bluntly, and so yeah, he died, but I almost expected that one. On the other hand, I didn't expect Lysander to turn to Aidan so quickly. I feel so bad for Gabriel, I want him to be happy =) I have to say that I think he's my favorite character. Okay, better end this now or I could continue on in a long tangent lol Update soon! ~Mia
Amindaya 2007-06-24 ch 24,	abuseYay, I'm glad you decided to finish it. :D Can't wait for more.
merrymowmow 2007-06-04 ch 24,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
Raomina 2007-05-28 ch 24,	abuseHey, i'm a new reader of your stories and i have quite a few things to say right after reading this story. i had enjoyed the character developments and the plot and your writing style is good, but i have also have a few other things i want to bring up. please don't take this personally, but i'm just going to tell you what i, as a reader, think of this sudden 'twist' in the plot. firstly, i'm really surprised at the sudden change in personalities of the characters. i don't mean any offense, but the Gabriel being Gideon thing (if that is indeed the case) and Uriah being his lover is very very unrealistic, don't you think? especially after we've seen things from Gabriel's pov, and thus his love for Lysander and lack of for Uriah. i agree that the personality change of Aiden might be acceptable, since we haven't really seen his pov very much and it was quite progressive, but Gabriel? it almost sounds as though you just thought of the twist to surprise the reader, even though what happened previously does not really support it. i mean, i really do love your characters, but some things just don't fit. and, i feel that the relationship between aiden and lysander is a little too rushed, so much that it seems as though you just want to get on with the rebellion. and lysander fighting for aiden? a bit too fast, i think. he WAS really in love with gabriel, and his rage would only make him fight for himself. unless, of course, this chapter takes place quite a while after the previous chapter. that would make more sense, even though the time lag is not suggested whatsoever. anyway, i'm sorry for ranting on and on like that. i'm a natural critic and i really have enjoyed reading this story, up till this twist, which is why my reaction is so against it. i'm not expecting you to do anything to this story or even take this review very seriously. i just thought you might want to know the opinions of one of your readers. =) ...and on this note, update soon. =P

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