Reminds me of Legend of Zelda, lol. Very nice, and some parts would fit better if the poem was broken up. Stanzas and all that.

I really like this, and you did an awesome job! What makes us fall in love with the dark heroes?

I loved this part especially:
'A perfect dark hero
Come to find his dusty love again.
You're the hero, you're the crook,
You're the roaming romantic,
You're a wandering musician
And a perfect enigmatic.'

Awesome.. keep it up!
-Frodo

::clapping:: ^^ It was very good. It was a little confusing in some parts, but overall it was a very good poem ^_^

It's very pretty, but kind of sad. We all need a hero, but not one like this. Even if the person it was about was dark, the poem is beautiful, wonderful, and inspirational.