Disturbing. Its "Final Destination" minus the rich bimbos. The attack of the gay hillbillies. AHH!

creepy as **.

i like your writing style. it makes for an interesting story. can you put everything into smaller paragraphs? that'll make it easier to read.

If you hadn't bunched up the words maybe people will read it.

great dyl. (^.^)
I'll read it some other time.