Depressing, but that is alright because depressing poems are the greatest to read. You know that the person who wrote them was drawing there emotions into their writing and that makes it all the better. Awesome work keep it up.

-Black Rose

This was one of the few positive suicide poems I've read (doesn't that sound strange?). Quite well written, though some of the lines don't flow as well as they wise, it's a great poem

ColdFrost

well, it's a positive suicide attempt, not like most of my stuff, lol. well done

Wow. This is really good, you're a talented writer. Keep up all the wonderful work!

loving it!

that ended on a fairly positive note. q_p

YaY, he didn't die _ it has saspence, which is great! love it*

wow i wish that everyone thought of their friends and family when going to hang themselves. sorry that i haven't read your story yet, but to be quite honest, i've been busy, i can promise you that i will and that i'll just read poetry for now _

interesting, dark, and something ive gone through before, starts out dark yet with a weird tinge of hope, not a true one, but a hue of it, anywayz, good flow and muchly well written, nicely done

i think this is a good poem! i like it! in fact, i'm going to let my friend read it, right now! keep up the amazing work!

Nice job ;) This poem flows smoothly, and the rhyming is great.

very uplifting! especially for a suicide poem. good job!

mysterykittyx

Wow.

I like the flow on this. The imagery I got was nice as well, I could see the person battling with himself(?). Incredible work!

Keep writing!

You did a great job showing the internal struggle.

Heart of the Sword