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Ayameko AiKage 2003-12-30 . chapter 1
Brown and curiosity, huh? And reminiscent. Rational again. I can see where you got the steady part of it. Brown doesn't seem to change much.
soulspring 2003-09-05 . chapter 1
"Wistful memories long to be released again"

i love that line.
cosmo-queen 2003-08-07 . chapter 1
I really liked the way you described the emotions associated with brown. It was very original.
*cosmo-queen*
handle187 2003-08-01 . chapter 1
This is a very good description of brown, in terms of the different cultural associations of the Earth element.
Needa S 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
Outstanding job!
PainKiller 2003-07-28 . chapter 1
Just brilliant... I can't say enough about the marvelousness of these color poems, and this one is no exception to your high-set rule.

"Logic cancels out what the heart yearns to say"... how do you come up with lines like these? It's remarkable, and so is this poem.
Platinum Azure 2003-07-27 . chapter 1
I likes this one. Keep up the good work!
~Lovelorn Genius
Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
True Illusion 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
somehow i knew you'd go with the earthy feel for this. very well done!
Mime 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Brown is such a special color. It's the shade of rich earth.
CoolBeans18s 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Amazing! I think brown is a beautiful colour... I always associate it with the Earth.

~ CoolBeans18s
WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Cool
Children of the Root 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Awesome. I love the line "Steady and trustworthy like a holding tree." So true.
Lady B.V Rose 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Hmm...not a fan of the colour brown...sorta dull...oh well...^^;

This reminds me of the school swot! ehehehe...^_~ so true to them...and I think they like brown...*shrugs* ah who knows...

B.V.Rose~~
Stoffpferd 2003-07-24 . chapter 1
When reading the first stanza I had a picture of the fifties to my mind, like a photograph. Again you did a great job on this!

~Stoffpferd~
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