 Ayameko AiKage 2003-12-30 . chapter 1Brown and curiosity, huh? And reminiscent. Rational again. I can see where you got the steady part of it. Brown doesn't seem to change much. |
 soulspring 2003-09-05 . chapter 1"Wistful memories long to be released again"
i love that line. |
 cosmo-queen 2003-08-07 . chapter 1I really liked the way you described the emotions associated with brown. It was very original.
*cosmo-queen* |
 handle187 2003-08-01 . chapter 1This is a very good description of brown, in terms of the different cultural associations of the Earth element. |
 Needa S 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Outstanding job! |
 PainKiller 2003-07-28 . chapter 1Just brilliant... I can't say enough about the marvelousness of these color poems, and this one is no exception to your high-set rule.
"Logic cancels out what the heart yearns to say"... how do you come up with lines like these? It's remarkable, and so is this poem. |
 Platinum Azure 2003-07-27 . chapter 1I likes this one. Keep up the good work!
~Lovelorn Genius |
 Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 . chapter 1Brilliant! |
 True Illusion 2003-07-24 . chapter 1somehow i knew you'd go with the earthy feel for this. very well done! |
 Mime 2003-07-24 . chapter 1Brown is such a special color. It's the shade of rich earth. |
 CoolBeans18s 2003-07-24 . chapter 1Amazing! I think brown is a beautiful colour... I always associate it with the Earth.
~ CoolBeans18s |
 WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-07-24 . chapter 1Cool |
 Children of the Root 2003-07-24 . chapter 1Awesome. I love the line "Steady and trustworthy like a holding tree." So true. |
 Lady B.V Rose 2003-07-24 . chapter 1Hmm...not a fan of the colour brown...sorta dull...oh well...^^;
This reminds me of the school swot! ehehehe...^_~ so true to them...and I think they like brown...*shrugs* ah who knows...
B.V.Rose~~ |
 Stoffpferd 2003-07-24 . chapter 1When reading the first stanza I had a picture of the fifties to my mind, like a photograph. Again you did a great job on this!
~Stoffpferd~ |