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| Ayameko AiKage 2003-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseBrown and curiosity, huh? And reminiscent. Rational again. I can see where you got the steady part of it. Brown doesn't seem to change much. |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abuse"Wistful memories long to be released again" i love that line. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the way you described the emotions associated with brown. It was very original. *cosmo-queen* |
| handle187 2003-08-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good description of brown, in terms of the different cultural associations of the Earth element. |
| Needa S 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOutstanding job! |
| PainKiller 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseJust brilliant... I can't say enough about the marvelousness of these color poems, and this one is no exception to your high-set rule. "Logic cancels out what the heart yearns to say"... how do you come up with lines like these? It's remarkable, and so is this poem. |
| Platinum Azure 2003-07-27 ch 1, | abuseI likes this one. Keep up the good work! ~Lovelorn Genius |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! |
| True Illusion 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abusesomehow i knew you'd go with the earthy feel for this. very well done! |
| Mime 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseBrown is such a special color. It's the shade of rich earth. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I think brown is a beautiful colour... I always associate it with the Earth. ~ CoolBeans18s |
| WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseCool |
| Children of the Root 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I love the line "Steady and trustworthy like a holding tree." So true. |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHmm...not a fan of the colour brown...sorta dull...oh well...^^; This reminds me of the school swot! ehehehe...^_~ so true to them...and I think they like brown...*shrugs* ah who knows... B.V.Rose~~ |
| Stoffpferd 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWhen reading the first stanza I had a picture of the fifties to my mind, like a photograph. Again you did a great job on this! ~Stoffpferd~ |