wow, that really is lovely. you're quite the writer, you know!

Wow. From that I get water, cool, soothing, contemplative, peaceful. Again, very smooth, eloquent language. Good job!

I really like how you can put a picture in someones mind with the words. Great Job!!

very relaxing and soothing. i love the metaphors with water.

~ One of my favorite colors. You brought more life to it.


c. butterfly~**

This would have to be my favourite colour poem of yours. The emotions you associate blue with are brilliantly done.
*cosmo-queen*

Beautiful...Awesome job!

I think that out of all your color poems, this is your best... it was peaceful, serene, beautfiul, and marvelously written. Excellent work here.

This poem is now my favorite color-poem. I especially like the last line.
Keep up the good work!
~Lovelorn Genius

Alas, my favourite colour!
This is so deep...sounds like a very thoughtful person.

very nice. most people see blue as a color of sadness, but i've always liked thinking of it as a calmer and deeper color, since it's my favorite and i happen to love water. great poem, keep it up!

That was so...beautiful. Indigo is one of my favorite colors. I especially liked the first line in the second stanza.

"Sea of thought to rival even the ocean's depth" - Brilliant! The imagrey in this poem is amazing. You did a wonderful job with this!

~ CoolBeans18s

Such imagery... how wonderful

I always thought of blue as calming. I especially like the second line. I think that says it all. Blue relaxes me so much.