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| Written 2005-02-01 ch 1,  | abusewow, that really is lovely. you're quite the writer, you know! |
| Ayameko AiKage 2003-12-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. From that I get water, cool, soothing, contemplative, peaceful. Again, very smooth, eloquent language. Good job! |
| ActingIsMyPassion 2003-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you can put a picture in someones mind with the words. Great Job!! |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | abusevery relaxing and soothing. i love the metaphors with water. |
| eew 2003-08-15 ch 1, | abuse~ One of my favorite colors. You brought more life to it. c. butterfly~** |
| cosmo-queen 2003-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis would have to be my favourite colour poem of yours. The emotions you associate blue with are brilliantly done. *cosmo-queen* |
| Needa S 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful...Awesome job! |
| PainKiller 2003-07-28 ch 1, | abuseI think that out of all your color poems, this is your best... it was peaceful, serene, beautfiul, and marvelously written. Excellent work here. |
| Platinum Azure 2003-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is now my favorite color-poem. I especially like the last line. Keep up the good work! ~Lovelorn Genius |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAlas, my favourite colour! This is so deep...sounds like a very thoughtful person. |
| True Illusion 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abusevery nice. most people see blue as a color of sadness, but i've always liked thinking of it as a calmer and deeper color, since it's my favorite and i happen to love water. great poem, keep it up! |
| Mime 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was so...beautiful. Indigo is one of my favorite colors. I especially liked the first line in the second stanza. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuse"Sea of thought to rival even the ocean's depth" - Brilliant! The imagrey in this poem is amazing. You did a wonderful job with this! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSuch imagery... how wonderful |
| Children of the Root 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI always thought of blue as calming. I especially like the second line. I think that says it all. Blue relaxes me so much. |