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| Ajescent 2005-05-09 ch 1,   | Nice description of my favourite colour particularly liked the "paint the abyss of the night" idea, in my opinion that's an excellent use of imagery. |
| BrokenLover 2004-06-22 ch 1, | love the way you just keep ur poems simple and straight. But with powerful meaning. that keeps your readers think. ~Anna~ |
| Lellida 2004-04-23 ch 1, | Very nice. I've always pictured black as an elegant, powerful color. I like the language you used here. |
| Ayameko AiKage 2003-12-30 ch 1, | Interesting take on black. I guess you look for the good in everything, huh? I love the language you use to describe this! It's so eloquent and smooth! I'm thinking I'll like those other color ones you've got there... |
| Prowling Muse 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Wow... I just noticed this, but you kept BLACK for last. I'd be happy if I'm ever close to YELLOW. Or BLUE. Heck. Any of those colors are fine. |
| karmakaze 2003-10-26 ch 1, | I really liked this one. I like how you associated black with success and elegance, rather than with evil, like many people do. That's also how I see it. Great work! This really shows thinking outside the box. |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | very interesting... never thought of black that way before. an excellent piece! |
| thisisover 2003-08-15 ch 1, | yes. |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-08-11 ch 1, | Interesting take on what can both the most and least intriguing of colors...hmm. As always, perfectly literate and equipped with lovely imagery. There is a reason that you're on my faves list... |
| cosmo-queen 2003-08-07 ch 1, | Very good, I liked the fact that you didn't make black associated with just evil and darkness, as that's a bit stereotyped. This take was much more enjoyable. *cosmo-queen* |
| handle187 2003-08-01 ch 1, | Black is the color that allows us to see the light, no matter how dim. |
| Needa S 2003-07-29 ch 1, | It takes a GREAT poet to write a piece on Black..Do I have to say anymore... You are very talented girl... |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-07-28 ch 1, | great job...i have to read all the colors. i'll leave the review at the last one. |
| PainKiller 2003-07-28 ch 1, | I liked it that you mentioned the simple elegance of black... "perfect completeness" was also an awesome way to describe black. Now, we have to guess what color that you are! Hahaha... just kidding. Excellent work on the whole series. |
| Platinum Azure 2003-07-27 ch 1, | I likes black. =) Keep up the good work. ~Lovelorn Genius |