FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| rhyne 2004-05-02 ch 1,   | *smile* I like this... It gives hope. I don't need to tell you that it's nicely written; all of your stuff is nicely written. ^^ |
| marshbar960 2004-05-02 ch 1, | very inspirational and encouraging...thanks for sharing and keep on writing! |
| Soviet 2004-02-12 ch 1, | Very well done, I enjoyed it greatly |
| Modern Poet 2004-02-08 ch 1, | That was exellent! So well written, with such a mature, and caring outlook! |
| blakependragon 2004-02-08 ch 1, | o, good. *sigh* you have so many good poems it taking me forever to go through them later |
| MJT13 2004-01-26 ch 1, | This... I think that this was a great poem. I beat my meaning by a mile. It's kind of like that move : "Pay It Forward"... I loved that move... and now I love this poem. Keep up the good work. |
| glowing-little-rain-cloud 2003-11-08 ch 1, | that is so sweet. i love it! |
| Prowling Muse 2003-10-24 ch 1, | Ah... The old saying: Do unto others what you would do to yourself. Or was it "What goes around comes around."? No matter. This poem is beautiful in meaning, but it has no consistent rhythm. At least, not with these English words. Would the words flow in another tongue? |
| glow worm 2003-10-23 ch 1, | This was nice. |
| charisma1525 2003-09-21 ch 1, | I really enjoyed that. It was a very nice poem that I think a lot of people should take a lesson from. |
| Otternutter 2003-09-15 ch 1, | wow! I really like how you showed that one act of kindness can lead to kindness being shared everywhere! I also like how you used the seed and plant imagery to show it growing. I don't know if it was your intention, but it made me think of the many parts of the Bible when imagery of harvests and reaping are used. Just a thought :) Keep writing! |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-07 ch 1, | you are truly talented everything i haveread by you has been wonderful |
| soulspring 2003-09-05 ch 1, | a beautiful piece... i love it! |
| Seras Nova 2003-09-05 ch 1, | I love this poem adn I believe in it to the fullest. Beautiful. -Seras |
| unforeseen 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Ow--I have chills from this! Another awesome job. Beautiful message here.. -euro--=- |