This spoke to me too. Thanks for sharing , it was a pleasure to read. God Bless xxoo

Another amazing piece! True, it is angsty indeed but it has its own beauty as well. Excellent work. Keep writing!

~*~AbunaiChikara

wonderful! i like this a lot, nice rhyme and rhythm. the repetition works well with this also. awesome work!

You know, this poem could be interpreted in many ways, because it could mean different things to different readers. But, I think I caught a glimpse of what you were feeling you wrote this...

God is always with you. Remember that.

Your repetition was still marvelous, and I certainly loved the all the imagery with the stars and moon and heaven. No problems here. Keep writing.

Wow.

This poem really spoke to me, thanks for sharing... dreams... I love to dream; used to daydream all the time, and would get scolded for it. Dreams. Wow.

Very very good work!