Wow! Amazing how you can "expand" so much on "seeds"...
Never really thought about it that way before...
Really nice work, once again!
=)ur reader,
autumn leaves and oranges

Amazing again! Your poems are so deep it is incredible! Excellent excellent work!

~*~AbunaiChikara

nice piece! short, with nice flow and rhyme. nice bit of humor also. good job!

I liked the way you worked the metaphor idea of the seeds we plant into a work of yours. It's always such an interesting, and sometimes disturbing thing to think about. I think you've sewn many good seeds. ^_~

Ryhming... it seemed a little forced in the first stanza, but not to the extent that I have to struggle for my ryhmes. So don't pay attention to me. I thought the whole poem was excellent.

Great job! This poem makes you think.
I'm always cautious with rhyming poems, but you did an excellent job.

Keep up the good work!

Very good... It really makes you think this one... definitely going to favorites

Nice. I liked it.


~Heart of the Sword

Nice!
Interesting proverb/metaphor thing at the start- I've never heard it before.
It's just like a quick thought, a slight mention-- that this is how people judge you.