this story is very good so far, I just red the only chapters you have for now chapters 1 & 2. Chapter 2 was my fav tho, Sam is a cool Pirate and Val is as well. I can't wait to read more and see who wins the war. please write more soon, cuse I love it so far. ;)
~Crazy4-Cell-N-Legato~

and the other chapter. have fun at johns house

i read the first chappie!! *dances around like an idiot*

Hm...this' intriguing...that's for sure! Okay, time to look at pictures of Fox and Krystal!

! great idea! can't wait for an update!
the knights and the pirates? fantastic! ^_^ it's surely original! so who's the main characters on the knights side? or are you going to introduce them later? can't wait!
AQ

lol! that's hilarious... really creative

great job keep writing